The prompt was "rejection." And though our first thought as writers might be to write about the rejection of our poems, don't be limited by that. Rejection in any form could be the starting place for this poem. We took a very high example, "Mirror" by Sylvia Plath ( Read comments and interpretations of this poem at the Sylvia Plath Forum )
 These readings might also get you thinking:
  
"Sometime in 1912, before Robert Frost made his famous
leap to "live under thatch" in England, where he would become known as
a poet, he sent some of his poems to Ellery Sedgwick, the editor of The
Atlantic Monthly, and in due course received a personal reply that
read, "We are sorry that we have no place in The Atlantic Monthly for your
vigorous verse." Frost's submission included some of his finest early poems
-- "Reluctance," "Birches", and "The Road not Taken"... click
to read the rest of this article
  
  
  The article, "How
to Read Rejection" in Poets & Writers begins by saying: "THOUGH publishing isn't-and shouldn't be - the
primary measure of artistic worth, it goes a long way toward affirming one's
status as a writer."
  
  
  Rejection
Slips: A Balm for Writers and as Certain as Death says Gerald Haslam
in his piece.
  
  Editor George Seither says, "We don't reject writers -
we reject pieces of paper with writing on them."    Feeling better
now? 
  
  Robert Pirsig's great book Zen
and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance was rejected by 121 publishing
houses. Margaret Mitchell's classic novel Gone With the Wind was
rejected by over 25 publishers. "The public is not interested in Civil
War stories," one said. 
  
  One of this site's
visitors, Robert Stribley, sent us this note: Here's a site I'm sure
we can all enjoy - or perhaps "enjoy" isn't the right word! There are some
truly amazing rejection letters in here. http://www.rejectioncollection.com
 
Rejection
This morning
          as we walked,  my
        youngest son 
      and I found  Rose of Sharon blossoms, fallen 
      from our neighbor's trees onto our driveway. 
      They were pink when they first unfurled,
  
      but are blue-veined violet, curled up in death.
     
My three year
            old asks what they are.  He kicks one. 
      It rolls, lopsided and lovely, a few uneven inches.
  
      I pick one up and peel away the petals one by one,
  
      unwrapping it down to the white-gold, still intact,
  
      tiny, trembling stem of its center.  Pale yellow pollen 
      clings there in miniature, pearl-shaped globes. I hold
  
      it so carefully, I don't even breathe, and my son smiles. 
Then he knocks
            it down and stomps.  I can't
          help 
      but cry out a little, and he picks up another and
  
      another and more, and he pulls them all apart,
  
      ripping petals and stepping, rip, rip and step,
  
      until the asphalt all around him blossoms and blooms.
       
 
    
       
REJECTION
 In the car
  
      with my husband
  
      behind the wheel
  
      I imagine another man
  
      seated beside me
  
      whose hand seductively
  
      brushes my leg
  
      like the stimulating
  
      hint of a breeze
  
      on a still summer day
  
      just enough of a tease
  
      to desire much more
  
      and I gently rock
  
      back and forth
  
      in the seat
  
      squeeze my thighs tight
  
      travel miles away
  
      when a familiar voice
  
      barges into my pleasure
  
"We're lost as usual! 
On the wrong road!"
  
      and I come
  
      back to the present
  
      as an open map
  
      falls to the floor.
 
Norma Ketzis Bernstock
REJECTION MAKES WINGS WITH EACH LITTLE DEATH IT OFFERS
 And, I am not as silver as water, and my mirror is cracked.
  
      I've tried to love and found that love happens only in moments
  
      that pass like ripples over liquid skies, mistaken for clouds
  
      that hide the sun, or make just enough shade to make wondrous
  
      all the blazing glory of desires.
 
 Whatever I swallow of love always sticks in my throat
  
      fish bones in ice cream? Thorns in caramels? Sweetness
  
      in all that bitter glue of longing!
 
 Oh come, you know rejection, as much as I, and the love
  
      you wanted escaped on a horse, flying with wings
  
      chasing Pegasus who always runs from us as we reach
  
      for him flying, flying higher as we reach, like Browning said,
  
"reach must exceed grasp or what's a heaven for?"
  
      So we reach for love with words, long for love, wanting
  
      to live forever, either in flesh or on paper. But, does that stop
us,
  
      from enjoying the attempt to love, and there are always
  
      those brief and passing moments in which love grasps us
  
      and we know we are alive, and the words fall into place
  
      and the rhyme is new music engulfing the smiles
  
      of lovers, or readers, of those who want nuance,
  
      not just blasting sound that kills the mind with dance.
 
 The eyes of envious gods want to pick at our wet flesh
  
      and so we are not allowed to live forever, but perhaps, our love
  
      like Dante's, Shakespeare's, and Millay's lives on
  
      in sonnets which sharpen the fact that all is as temporal as the
trash
  
      sitting at the curb in the rain, hoping to be collected before it
spills
  
      messy into the gutters and runs down the drains
  
      at the ends of streets leading into nowhere.
 
 Most of the time, yes, most of the time, we are trying to love,
  
      and not loving, but we are trying, and when we stop trying,
  
      we're dead, even as we live on in sonnets that sting us
  
      with dead lovers of the ages who are gone as their words live
  
      and pierce us with longing for that perfected love, so good,
  
      so pure, so full, so erotic with desire, once felt, if fleeting
onto a page,
  
      or off into graves, or up, flying, flying, chasing that winged horse
  
      who always goes higher, up and away
  
      into the land of Supermen and Superwomen
  
      where we can't go!
  
      Finally our very flesh hangs rejected by time
  
      like a clock dripping over the back
  
      of a horse's hind,
  
      his wings flapping always up and away--
  
      as we reach, reach for love like a child
  
      begging cookies before dinner,
  
      running after that flying tail.
 
WITHHOLD THE MAYO
 The deli man asks me what I want
  
      But he won't give it to me.
  
      He'll make me the fresh turkey on rye
  
      With swiss, slaw and, sometimes, mayo;
  
      But the fresh, wry deli man
  
      Will not give me what he once did,
  
      That slice of slightly suggestive, deli-style flirtation.
  
      What happened to the attention he used to spread so freely?
  
      He forgets the fork, the napkin now and then.
  
      And gives me the bagel with the fewest seeds.
  
      He will not tell me when the fish salad is really fresh.
  
      And his buddies at the store
  
      Have other things to do when I arrive.
 
Ann Steiner
CYCLE
 A seed rejects its hull,
  
      and bursting, thrusting well
  
      beyond the sheltering earth,
  
      eventually becomes a blooming tree.
 
 Its leaves then push new blossoms
  
      from their perch upon a branch;
  
      but not before the pollen -
  
      surrendered to the bees -
  
      is scattered onto other flowers.
  
      Which, now pregnant, swell to fruit.
 
 Some rejected orbs, unwanted,
  
      plummet to the earth to rot
  
      and yield the podded seed to sleep
  
      within the warmly humid sod
  
      until another burst repeats
  
      the cycle of that endless thrust -
  
      dormant in each brimming seed -
  
      to become a blooming tree.
  
 
  
 
  
Catherine M. LeGault
REJECTION
I like it in the face,
  
      and if you want me to assume
  
      that little stricken look
  
      and howl,
  
      it is my pleasure not to.
I am no saint.
The nothing that you left
  
      is what I use to keep
  
      my burning holy.
DEAR EDITOR
 Enclosed are my poems. 
After your rejection slip arrives 
I'll want  to go out 
and see what other people do. 
Drop in somewhere, 
as though I'll been invited to tea, 
 
 I'll wear my whitest dress 
with white gloves and pearls to match. 
But what if no I'll home? 
What if they're on vacation, 
shopping, having afternoon sex, 
or watching Oprah. 
I'll leave a poem under the door. 
 
 Then I may go to the local
    bar 
to remind me that there are things 
other than pencil and paper and computer, 
such as noggins, jiggers, flagons and corkscrews. 
I will hope that the bartender is well 
and listening to everyone's plaints 
which will make mine sound the less sad. 
But what if the bar is closed? 
Do bars ever close? 
I'll make my way in 
quietly, but striding 
as though I'm a regular. 
I'll go up to the bartender in my white dress, 
with pearls and gloves to match. 
He'll be wearing his new toupee. 
I'll  tell him it's  so real 
even I can't tell the difference. 
Then ask if I can read my poems. 
He may squint at me, grin, 
and look aside to the others 
rinsing glasses all the while 
as though the weather depended on it. 
I will turn to the people at the bar 
their eyes fixed on the TV overhead 
their hands clutching spirits in a glass 
as if it were the elixir of life. 
I'll go sit between the  lavender Tee shirt 
and the metal studded over-age hot rodder 
and join them in their happy hour. 
Ask them what they do. Why they're here. 
I'll offer to read my poems. 
They'll refuse and ask me 
why I am wearing white 
on a somber day in winter. 
I will tell them white is the color of poetry 
and would they like to hear my white poetry? 
They will turn away 
  
 
 and reject my proposal. 
That would be hard to take. 
It would really set me off. 
I'd throw my poems in their faces 
tear up the place like a rejection slip. 
Then I'd walk out into the night 
and rouse the cabbie asleep at the wheel. 
He'll ask me "Where to, lady?" 
What would I say? 
  
 
Gaetana Cannavo
A ROSE BY ANY OTHER NAME
 when sally said no 
and meant it, 
no matter how often. 
the night the coach let me "warm' 
the bench during a playoff game 
my senior year in high school. 
every paper i turned into my 
english teacher, as i remember. 
all the doors that closed too quickly 
in my face, the summer i tried selling 
magazine subscriptions. 
the kidney someone gave 
my neighbor. 
the songs i offer 
my music publisher on a regular 
basis. 
my doctor's advice. 
this poem? 
 
ray cutshaw
AWAITING ACCEPTANCE
 I will have coffee and
    cigarettes on the porch. 
I will watch the morning, building itself from 
 
 fading darkness.  The
    men will arrive, 
and I will think that this is work 
 
 which I could do myself,
    but it will not 
be true: there are to be new steps, and I 
 
 will only watch.  There
    will be scrap heaps 
and sawdust, and I will be busy, inspecting 
 
 cobwebs in the joists,
    pondering errant 
commas, and watching for the mailman. 
 
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